I don't normally read WiP's but I couldn't resist this one, and I'm so glad I gave in. This is wonderful. Excellent characterisation, especially of Stiles, and the Hales are fantastic, especially Laura. Lots of great lines, too, such as:

What is with all the suicidal deer? Seriously, how is the species not extinct?

Good question. Deer are weird.

“Get your ass out there, or I will tell the twins what happened to their Twilight shrine.”

LOL!

“She’s decided you belong to her,” Derek explains. “Your future is grim.”

Hee! Laura is awesome, though, and I am totally up for being adopted by her.

“The problem here is that I listened to Derek, and Derek is always wrong.”

DYING. I am dying. This is so true. But I love it.

On to the next part!