Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. You created such an intricate and detailed universe that was also very realistic. I just about jumped out of my chair when I got to the point that Stiles realised that he didn't have to deal with Gerard, because I hadn't realised it myself! Like Stiles, I'd assumed he'd have to do the fighting. It was such a relief for both Stiles and the reader to know that he didn't have to. And it felt really natural as well - it felt like this was the way things should be.

I had a feeling Stiles would stay and it's impossible to fault his logic. He could spend the rest of his life trying to get back or he can make the most of what he has. (I also felt that the dream he had was to let him know that his Scott and father were indeed dead, although they might not have died in that way.)

You have an incredible way with words and know how to tell an engaging story. I think this fic will easily become one of the classics of this fandom. Loved the mythology, loved the characters - everything is perfect. I also really liked your explanation of why Stiles/Derek in his world would have been so difficult to make work. Not that I dislike the pairing or think people are wrong for shipping it. I just liked your summary and can definitely see the appeal of having a relationship between the two take place in a universe where are least one of them is whole. I can understand if you don't want to write more and feel you've told the story you've wanted to tell. But if you do write more in this universe, then please know you'll have people who will most certainly read every word.

Thank you for a great fic!