^_^ This was so awesome! I've literally been checking your blog everyday for like a week, and when I saw this was posted I was so happy I squeaked. I really liked Ed's POV, and his recognition of Maes *crazy crazy craziness* I really loved the ending- it was happy, but it wasn't saccharine and that felt very true to the universe you 'made'. The only criticism I can think of (for lo, though my barely controllable fangirling is no doubt flattering, it is perhaps unhelpful?) is that Ed's scar seems to come outta nowhere. Maybe I missed it in the previous stories? (I'm re-reading the series in a fit of glee, with an eye out for this detail) But it gets mentioned so often in this, I was like- "Wha- Where did this come from? What?" But really bro- I am not very much into fandom, but works like this make me glad I am. This is definetly THE epic! Congratulations on finishing it! (...for now? ;) haha, jk)
-GreatScott