I don't normally read WiP's but I couldn't resist this one, and I'm so glad I gave in. This is wonderful. Excellent characterisation, especially of Stiles, and the Hales are fantastic, especially Laura. Lots of great lines, too, such as:
What is with all the suicidal deer? Seriously, how is the species not extinct?
Good question. Deer are weird.
“Get your ass out there, or I will tell the twins what happened to their Twilight shrine.”
LOL!
“She’s decided you belong to her,” Derek explains. “Your future is grim.”
Hee! Laura is awesome, though, and I am totally up for being adopted by her.
“The problem here is that I listened to Derek, and Derek is always wrong.”
DYING. I am dying. This is so true. But I love it.
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Date: 2013-06-29 09:44 pm (UTC)What is with all the suicidal deer? Seriously, how is the species not extinct?
Good question. Deer are weird.
“Get your ass out there, or I will tell the twins what happened to their Twilight shrine.”
LOL!
“She’s decided you belong to her,” Derek explains. “Your future is grim.”
Hee! Laura is awesome, though, and I am totally up for being adopted by her.
“The problem here is that I listened to Derek, and Derek is always wrong.”
DYING. I am dying. This is so true. But I love it.
On to the next part!